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Relationship Partner with BPD (Straight and LGBT+) => Romantic Relationship | Detaching and Learning after a Failed Relationship => Topic started by: mitatsu on April 16, 2015, 01:36:15 PM



Title: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: mitatsu on April 16, 2015, 01:36:15 PM
I have never done anything like this in my life but this just spilled out... . for me i'm kinda pleased with my musing  

I found a place in my heart one day

a place of sun and light that would never go away

i shared this place with you and said you could stay

but my light and sun you took away

the place you left was cold and dark

but a place i knew there was a spark

so i took that spark and lit a flame

and now my place has warmth again

this place has peace and love i know

this place has room for me to grow

this place is not to be hidden away

and this place will be shared with someone one day

this place is me and all i will be

this place is mitatsu and i'm glad i'm me




Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: Lifewriter16 on April 16, 2015, 01:41:22 PM
A fantastic piece of poetry.

Thank you for sharing it with us.

Lifewriter


Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: DyingLove on April 16, 2015, 02:34:12 PM
I have never done anything like this in my life but this just spilled out... . for me i'm kinda pleased with my musing  

I found a place in my heart one day

a place of sun and light that would never go away

i shared this place with you and said you could stay

but my light and sun you took away

the place you left was cold and dark

but a place i knew there was a spark

so i took that spark and lit a flame

and now my place has warmth again

this place has peace and love i know

this place has room for me to grow

this place is not to be hidden away

and this place will be shared with someone one day

this place is me and all i will be

this place is mitatsu and i'm glad i'm me

Awwww... . that was just so darn touching... . I guess some tears are better than others... . these were good tears... . Thank you for sharing Mitatsu. It was extremely thoughtful of you and shows your tenderness.


Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: ReclaimingMyLife on April 16, 2015, 10:42:29 PM
Love this!  Your words are inspire the best in me.   Thank you.   


Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: Mutt on April 16, 2015, 11:27:22 PM
Eloquently stated mitatsu


Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: Beach_Babe on April 16, 2015, 11:43:10 PM
Love this


Title: Re: I just wrote this for me and all of us here on this journey
Post by: downwhim on April 17, 2015, 12:00:43 AM
beautiful